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This has a GREAT vibe to it! Well done!! :)

sacarious responds:

Oh thanks man!
Im glad you enjoyed it

This is so rad!

How did this pass by everyones ears? Shit this is sick. Good stuff man!

Raaaad

Great way to start my morning!

Mellow

Hmmm, it's pretty mellow, it's got a general beat that's pretty consistent with itself. I found some parts were just plain or lacking a little extra finesse, (like a 2:01).

There was one melody in particular that sounded kinda wonky too, (the beeping melody around 3:06), i think just because the notes were sometimes everywhere.

Good show tho dude! Good to see some new stuff from ye ;)

ObsidianSnow responds:

Man, 2:01 gave me so much trouble. I must have spent a solid 30 minutes just trying to get that drop right. Couldn't get it quite right in the end, so I just let it ring for 2 beats... Mayhaps I'll go back and try it again, I'll see if I have time.

As for the stuff at 3:06... I built it all off the shiny new theory I've been learning. Everything fits into the chord structure, but I know what you mean. Probably mixed up a chord somewhere in there, but I was planning on cleaning that up tonight anyways (OMFG!? OS IS DOING EDITS!? OH GOD WHAT IS GOING ON). Good to know I'm not crazy.

Thanks for the review, JD! Keep in touch, bro.

--EDIT--
I made some changes to those sections, they sound a lot better now.

How very heroic

Cool man, even if starbarians HAD this theme, it would fit quite well.

10 just cuz

Cuz the story takes place in winnipeg, and i'm in winnipeg! Win! :D

*crazy applause*

Hahaaaaa, THE TOILET IS CALLING!

Evil-Dog responds:

You don't have much time then haha

SHUT UUUUPPPP

Love it :P

Interesting..

Its not too bad, my taste in Techno is more dance-ish, but yeah its pretty trippy :P Nice work

ObsidianSnow responds:

lol thanks, bud. I think this probably could have been quite a bit better if I hadn't been forced to use my crappy laptop speakers for the mastering, though - I was mostly just shooting in the dark to be honest. XD

Funny you mention dance, though, I was planning on tasting that next.

anyways, thanks for the comments!

Beautiful!

As i told you just before you left google talk, the intro is TOTALLY World-map music for an RPG

Love it dude :D

ObsidianSnow responds:

haha, yeah, the oboe does seem to have that effect. I'll keep that in mind.

Thanks for the review, bud!

Everything is Connected. 🙏💛✨

Jordan River @RiverJordan

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The Mystery School of Life

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