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Jordan River @RiverJordan

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Overhaul, part 2

Posted by RiverJordan - May 25th, 2010


Previously

So concerning the Exile series this is what's happening now:

Chapter 1 and 2 will be completely remade, Chapter 3 will be re-dubbed but not re-animated and an additional scene will be added. Chapter 4 will remain the same. Please, don't think of it as "a remake" of the first two though, think of them as new chapters.

The cast of chapter 1 has been hired, it will star:

Geoff Edwards, the voice of Dirge from "Xombie".
BiffTheTimid
AlmightyHans
Voicegirl

Chapter 1 and 2 will come out this summer, i will replace the older chapters and ask Tom to delete Exile: Remastered. (He's probably reading this going "ohhhh no I wont")

These redo's are 100% necessary. Everyone who has read the script agree's with this so PLEASE don't flame saying "keep moving forward ignore the past". Unfortunately, there are just some things that need to be said and introduced early on in the first 2 chapters that cannot be shown through flashbacks at a later date.

Chapter 5 is also in production and is looking VERY hawt. Chapter 1 and 2 will probably not have THE finest animation but it'll look good regardless, and does already.

Consider this as a wakeup call for myself, i'm going to do this series, and i'm going to do it right.

-Exert from Chapter 1-

VICTOR: Don't you understand?! I fought my whole life so you wouldn't have to!

LUKE: It's not like I asked you to! You did that on your own, just like I'm going to do this on my own.

VICTOR: And for what?! Glory? God dammit boy! Listen to me and listen well...I can tell you right now glory isn't worth a damn thing. Not worth looking into the eyes of every person I've had to bring to death, not worth the screams of the children I couldn't protect and sure as hell not worth the lives of those who had to save me when I couldn't save myself.

LUKE: But you were a hero!

VICTOR: Do you think that changes anything?! I have scars Luke...ones that won't ever go away. Not when every night I can still see the blood and torment that's burned itself into my memory. Is that really what you want?

LUKE: Well if fighting for your kingdom is so horrible then why are you still fighting?! You're retired! But I've seen you going through plans and blueprints at night! You hide weird letters in your room! And what about the weapon crates that pass through our house every month?!

[Victor crosses his arms]

VICTOR: I don't know what you're talking about.

[Luke smacks the table again]

LUKE: My ass you don't!

Overhaul, part 2


Comments

looks like you are really pouring your soul into this series! going back to fix things in past episodes proves it- that screen cap looks stunning!

I feel that the older chapters, while..semi-decent, were REALLY just a stupid kid with a story that was half-assed. Honestly after chapter 1 i didn't know what i was planning.

With planning, it changes things and i really want to deliver on this series, therefor the redo. Honestly chapter 1 NOW and the new ch1 will look and feel completely different, it will be darker, the story will only slightly be the same.. its gonna be good.

thats a my douche nider!

Sure is :( Always thinking of the story first..ugh

Dam striaght you are :D